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Comment on code by helese

helese — Mon, 25 May 2009 15:52:56 +0000

interesting what you’re thinking

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Comment on Research Planning Thus Far… by Jawbreaker

Jawbreaker — Fri, 20 Jun 2008 00:51:41 +0000

Somehow i missed the point. Probably lost in translation Anyway … nice blog to visit.

cheers, Jawbreaker!!!

Comment on Research Planning Thus Far… by Siobhan Dannaher

Siobhan Dannaher — Wed, 15 Nov 2006 23:51:01 +0000

I agree with Sam that it still seems a little broad right now and you do not want to get too bogged down whan you research for this paper. I would suggest perhaps talking about how Campbell’s company has changed their ads to accomadate society as a whole. I think that you still need to do some more research but your sorce sounds reliable.

Comment on Research Planning Thus Far… by khj1202

khj1202 — Wed, 15 Nov 2006 23:44:33 +0000

First of all, I really like your topic for research project. Also, I think your argument is pretty clear to me. The resoures that you found so far will pretty help you I think. Yeah, I think also that you need little bit more of primary sources as megazines, articles.
Anyway, Good job!

Comment on Research Planning Thus Far… by kkellehe

kkellehe — Wed, 15 Nov 2006 23:27:21 +0000

I really like your topic for your research paper, and by limiting your search to a specific topic, though Campbell’s will have a lot of information. You seem to have done some research to support your topic, and it seems like it’s going to be a very interesting paper, though I’m a little unclear as to what your argument is.

Comment on Research Planning Thus Far… by samdipaola

samdipaola — Wed, 15 Nov 2006 23:26:15 +0000

Kelly,
I like the argument that your research is framing. It is a little broad though, but it’s an immense topic that I think will be easier to narrow down once you develop a specific thesis. It seems like you have done quite a bit of research thus far, and it is interesting how you have looked at what aspects of the company have not changed. It seems as if you have successfully identified what advertising techniques the company utilizes in order to sell their products. It’s also great that you have found good resources that trace the Campbell’s company over the past few decades. Good work!

Comment on Research Planning by sdannahe

sdannahe — Wed, 01 Nov 2006 23:33:34 +0000

Hmm, I like your idea. The soup can itself has not changed, obviously, so I would like to hear about the mode of the ads and if the slogan for cambell’s ads has changed at all.

Comment on Research Planning by Sam DiPaola

Sam DiPaola — Wed, 01 Nov 2006 23:27:09 +0000

I think that your arugment will involve the historical context around the Campbell Soup Company, and how they have stayed so popular throughout the years. Your research on things like commercial techniques and slogans will be successful in supporting your argument.

Comment on Research Planning by Kristin Gauta

Kristin Gauta — Wed, 01 Nov 2006 23:26:11 +0000

I really like your idea and it seems as if you can find a lot of articles about it because its so popular. Your general topic seems clear to me, and when creating a thesis, my only comment would be that you should make a more direct statement..maybe even adressing a specific time period? Depending on how much research you find will determine this, but so far I like where its going!=)

Comment on Research Planning by Kyle Wadkins

Kyle Wadkins — Wed, 01 Nov 2006 23:22:54 +0000

I think that you have chosen a really good idea, it seems that your argument is not really formed yet. However, you are hinting that it has changed to fit mainstream culture throughout the years. I think perhaps you should expand on that and nail down a precise “thesis.”